Asttle Writing - Narrative - Lucy Starts to Hear Whispers

Teacher Note - ‘UNASSISTED’ ASTTLE WRITING

The children write for a total of 40 minutes. Within that timeframe they have to plan their writing (a brainstorm) write, edit and re-craft their work. They are not allowed to use dictionaries or word cards. The students completed their writing on paper but have typed it out for their blogs.

 WALT write a creative narrative story!

Once upon a time there was a girl named Lucy and she lived with her aunt because her parent's past away when she was only little.When she grew older she would always get these whispers in her head and she thought that it was just her imagination but then she had seen that it was true. But when Lucy grew older and older things started to seem pretty weird like things started to dissapear but she was 15 so she didn't really care that much. Then she heard  something whispering to her like when she was little it was a mean gost with an evil witch that lived across from her house.They had been whispering in her head her hole life so they can turn her into an evil kid! They were bully's.The next's day Lucy went to go and catch the bus to school when Lucy got to school she got some more whispers in her head again and she new that it was the mean gost and the evil witch so...She figerd a way out that she can put a spell on them so they would stop whispering to her and kill them so they can not make her into a evil kid.When she got home she went in her room and searched up on her laptop how to put a spell on a witch and a mean gost to kill them.When she searched up how to kill the mean gost and the evil witch she went to the store and got the ingredients when she got home she made the poshion and then she went to the witches house and the witch said what are you doing her little girl and she said i'm here to give you this poshion to drink so it will make me into a evil kid and the witch said yes when she was inside the witch and the gost drank it and turned into a stinky little rat and Lucy laughed.Then she squished them and then she didn't have to listen to the whispers again.