28/05/2021
Yesterday we went to a show and the show was about this ounces upon a time there were their two girls and there names where Sissy and Kahu.
Kahu yelled out Sissy,Sissy where are you sissy and then Nan comes in and says Kahu come with me to do some jobs and then Kahu says i don't want to do some jobs and then nan why were your sister and then you can here sissy when she say HeHeHeHeHe and that part was really funny and when she keept on doing it nan found her and then Kahu found her.
In the middle Kahu and sissy found a magic kete in the garden and what came out was potiki the last flaming fingernail of Mahuika when potiki came out Kahu got really seared and afraid when nan came out she said watch out that is the magic kete and be really careful of that magic kete and when sissy got the sticks that she was holding behind her back nan saw and when nan grab them she was trying to let it out but then she turned to coal but when they saw potiki he said that he was going to take them to the underground and were pukeko swamp was and when they were going they found pukeko and he had a burning beak.
Next steps
- Re-read each sentence - does it look right? does it make sense?
- Full stops and capital letters
- Correct your spelling errors
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